Sunday, November 7, 2010

Bombay a.k.a. Aamchi Mumbai

Been a while
This slimy bile
Chained me
Drained me
Alone in this hamlet
Filled with a sore regret
Striving to survive
Where people are so naïve
Those who failed to know
Failed to grow, that
Pushing is a must
Nothing else is just
However, as I near the top
I learn, its an important drop, down.
I light a few smiles
That last for miles
A blissful family
Is in which you’re free
Even as the bile extinguishes
Whatever’s left of your goodness.

5 comments:

Namrata said...

:) ....I like it. You're writing has gotten even better.

Jack Gritter said...

i wont be so sure about that!..but its better than the crap i used to write!

Anish said...

like it.

Aboli said...

i like the way you use really expressive words and adjectives. it adds to the feel :D

Jack Gritter said...
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