Saturday, October 4, 2008

Love

He waited for her day and night
Beat around in his impatience with all his might
Then when she came
He said, the effect she created was to blame.

She walked like a queen
No intention of calling her mean
Moving her hands along the wheat
She approached him with her bare feet.

Her voice sounded melodious
The cuckoos were furious
To be with her was better than heaven
He had found his girl, like all men.

Her eyes took him away
To a land unknown to many, faraway
The sensation was of pure bliss
He forgot to call her even Miss.

She seemed to enchant him
He was in a trance, it did seem
A witch could have been no better
No wonder they live in gutter.

Spreading peace in his mind
Its true, love made him blind
Her face was radiant
Cannot be described salient.

Couldn't live a day without her
Everything was in a blur
He failed the test
Love was such a pest.

Every time she laughs a flower springs
More precious than the king of kings
He could've died of that attraction
He didn't, higher was the rate of inflation.

Her hair flowed like a river
Felt glad when went near
He had got what he dreamt about
His last wish now was to shout out.



I hope you enjoyed the funniest poem i've written. Can you guess who i'm referring to in this poem, can you???

28 comments:

Anish said...

Riigghhtt. ok i got it , i think i no hu it is. hmm tadi interesting.

Glox said...

omg. its amazing.
and im not even gonna try 2 figure out who it is. i mean, i've had enuf trying-to-figure-out-but-totally-failing for a lifetime.

Namrata said...

does anish read minds or something?
and i thot viashnav took the whole bus ride trying to convince us that its not about sumbody...
oh god, pls dont tell me its about the girl in ap...or in symbiosis...
speaking of which, i truly have had enough guessing-the-girl to last sumtime...give me a few days and ill be bugging vaishnav...ell c...

Glox said...

im not even gonna try.
ok- maybe a l i t t l e bit.
sooooooooo....do we know this girl?

Haunted Guy said...

Wow!
Inspiring ain't i?
Vaishnav, u said dat u din have a crush. U swore u din't. Wat's all dis bout den?
Neway, i guess ur feelin like i was den. So ur burstin to tell sum1 but can't gather de guts and dunno whom to trust.
So u decide either to stay shut or u do all de funny things i did.
Hmmmm, gonna be loads of fun.
U can tell me if u want, if u don't, it's ur choice.Byde way, anish, wat's ur guess?

Jack Gritter said...

DO YOU all think, honestly, that i'm goin to tell u?

Glox said...

probably not. but im not even gonna try.

Namrata said...

she keeps saying that...
dont listen to tapan, u can trust us...cummon, have we ever abused ure trust before?
u kno what, i bet anish doesn't even kno...
actually, i wouldnt b surprised if this was a stupid prank...

Glox said...

im pretty sure it is.
still not gonna try. unless u've noticed, i've not exactly been in the gossip-y mood.

Glox said...

i take back what i said.
i.have.got.to.find.out.
now im all back in the game and ready for interrogation.
*rubs hands eagerly*

Anish said...

a prank huh?

Haunted Guy said...

Wat prank?

Haunted Guy said...

oh, his poem?
No it wasn't, we found out....

Glox said...

*snigger*

Haunted Guy said...

Wowie, now u got onto sniggering.
Jeez, gals are so sniggerish.

Glox said...

and ur point is?

Namrata said...

well nidhi has a reason to snigger...tho i dont approve of it, but thats a different story...

Aboli said...

this is actually quite a sweet poem. and i don't care who it is. wait. did i actually say that???

Glox said...

yes u just said that,aboli. at least i think u did.
*ahem* *snigger*

Aboli said...

that was yesterday. today, though, i do care. and i will have it out of him no matter what! muhahaha.

Glox said...

rite. he'll tell u.
best of luck wit ur little mission impossible.

Jack Gritter said...

hey guys, guess what?

Aboli said...

what?
And now, as usual, he'll give this stupid smug little grin and go,"you don't know."
vaishnav. do happen to know that i hate you from the very bottom of my heart? not that you care. *tongue sticking out* *rude grin*

Glox said...

thats not what he was going to say.
he was going to say, "whatever u do...dont fart."

ok, so aboli n me have done our quota of gessin...mind telling us what, vaishnav?

Aboli said...

that's stupid.

Namrata said...

it is.

Jack Gritter said...

If u r good at sumthin, don't do it for free. But whatever u do, don't fart.

Glox said...

bleh.